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You don't look at me anymore
You won't open up to me
Something is wrong
But I can feel it too
And I realize something

All the kisses you gave me
All the secrets you told me
All the times we shared together
Everything
It all feels so empty now

When you touch me
It feels forced
When you talk
It sounds mechanical
I feel so cold

You didn't mean it
And I can't feel it
It was all just a lie
So I guess
It was only synthetic love
©2007-2009 ~WorldofEmotion
:iconworldofemotion:

Author's Comments

A poem I was thinking of last night, inspired by the song "Orange Crush" by STEFY. I don't actually feel this way. :XD:

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:iconwilwar77:
I got the first one ,well done: many feel that way and don't know what to say; but you in love, that is so true
the right way know,
for the :star: always tracks true
WELL DONE!!!!!MY BRIGHTING :star:
:iconninva:
Oh, I thought you were heart broken. x3
Nice poem, you fooled me. :P ... And made my feel guilty for some reason. o.o"

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:icontikallover:
Good job! It's a beautiful poem, and so true in many cases.

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:iconhidoikijo:
This is really deep but it feels so true. Me likes! This is how I feel about my best friend right now...

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Someday you'll understand the reason behind there confusing days. For now, please smile...
:iconworldofemotion:
Thank you. :) :hug:

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Never forget who you are.
:iconworldofemotion:
I'm sorry about that. ^^; But I'm glad you liked it! :)

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Never forget who you are.
:iconworldofemotion:
Thanks! :)

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Never forget who you are.
:iconworldofemotion:
Thanks...and I really hope everything will work out with your friend... :hug: :hug:

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Never forget who you are.
:iconeffamay:
This is one that, unfortunately, many many people will be able to relate to...
Very well written :+fav:

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Dum spiro spero.
:iconworldofemotion:
Thank you, and thanks for faving it. :hug: And sadly, that is true...I wish it didn't have to happen...

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Never forget who you are.

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